The Dock (Wip)

[River]

Hi XSI people :).
Here is my personal work (WIP). I inspired by Temujin (http://www.temujin.cz/) artwork:
http://www.temujin.cz/img/concept/dock_243.jpg

i add some my (own) ideas (more models and other stuff)

Here is my progress:
Shade-Wire
http://sweb.cz/mistle/shade-wire.jpg

Preview Render (Lighting test):

http://sweb.cz/mistle/dock-preview.jpg


PS: Sorry for my english.

[REZI-st]

nice progress River :) keep posting :taz:

[Adrian Lazar]

yeah, looks great!

[Firebird]

Looks Great so far

Are u planning to texture it different from the reference or keep the style ?

Nice work

[giant551]

looks really nice and clean modeling, keep posting!

[River]

thx. for all comment.

little update:

http://sweb.cz/mistle/dock_test03.jpg

[Turin]

nice, but i like your lighting test more than this version. its too dark now. maybe something between these two would be best :)

[River]

OK. I create other composite test :
http://sweb.cz/mistle/dock_test04.jpg


Next step - textures :wacko: and materials

[xelad]

the added light makes such a big different, you can all the detail and hard work you've put into it now. good Job keep it going! =]

[Leo]

Looking very good so far... keep it up!

[MmAaXx]

looks nice!!

We want some character walking in the scene ;)

[River]

yes, character is coming soon :)

[River]

little update (textures):
http://sweb.cz/mistle/dock_post_preview.jpg

[River]

small update (maybe 90% final..maybe):

http://sweb.cz/mistle/dock-beta.jpg

[River]

Ok. This is prefinal version. What do you think? I like for every c&c.

http://sweb.cz/mistle/dock_prefinal.jpg

[miga]

Its a really nice image. I like the new color with the clouds. Perhaps you should add some hills at 3/4 of the outside world.

[River]

other prefinal version (with another clouds):
http://sweb.cz/mistle/dock_prefinal2.jpg

[thiago]

looks very nice, I just think you have a problem with premultiply on your compositing.

That black pixel on the border of the image (you can see in the whole layer that is over the sky).
You can remove it on Photoshop selecting that layer and go on Layer>matting>remove black matte.

it happens because of the premultiply, it's a common thing... You need to interpret as
"premultiplied".

[PetrZ]

Hi, I like cartoon feeling from the image, but there is something wrong in the pose of the character. It's too artificial without sense of weight. Maybe adding a little of asymmetry and relaxing the pose helps.

[Aumakua]

Very good work, I like the painterly quality on the compositing, you could do a great matte painting out of this :)

[Nakary]

Very nice job River, it would be nice to actually see an animation on this...

keep it up.

:)

[ElysiumGX]

Great scene. Can't wait to see the final.

[River]

final is here: http://community.softimage.com/gallery/showimage.php?i=94&c=2

thx. for comment.

[Photon]

Hi River.
very looks nice!!

[River]

Hi River.
very looks nice!!

thank you :cowboy: