My Hitman

[Melih]

My Hitman WIP:

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/01.jpg


http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/02.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/03.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/04.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/05.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/06.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/07.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/08.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/09.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/10.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/11.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/12.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/13.jpg

Thanks.

[MmAaXx]

looks nice!

but check the shoulder, the loopedges are not so good..I think.

[huzeyfecoskun]

i agree with "MmAaXx" ,check your shoulder and the body propotions. face seems ok. keep it up

[Zac-Donald]

His shirt+collar looks like its almost a turtle neck or something, look at this photo and compare it to your model.

http://www.jerryoconnellfansite.com/photog/joc/tie.jpg

[Macphisto]

Shoulder are too low... and the arms look squeezed.

Think you don't need the double line on the legs to make the straight line on the pant, maybe only one with crease.

[Shine]

Hands look good. Although watch around the sides of the fingers, there shouldn't be as many wrinkles there, it should smooth out.
The character has quite a few anatomy issues that you should fix. Looking at good reference the whole time will help this. The head being the major issue. From the images you posted,
The eyes are too big and not shaped like eyes
The ears are too far back
There are problems with the edgeloops around the middle of the cheek and under the nose.
I can't work out which is his front and back, without looking at the head. You need to show the chest and shoulder blades and how they affect the cloth on top of it. The shoulders should feel bulky and push out the cloth.
I could go on a bit more if you wanted so good luck with it and i'll keep watch.

[Hash!]

Hi!...nice Hitman!...Like the others said, there are some proportions problems...The torso is really too long and the shoulders too low...A good human proportions reference could help you fix all those little details...just put that image in Rotoscopy in XSI and you could adjust your model...

Keep posting your updates!!!...I want to see the final result!!!

[Leo]

notwithstanding the previous comments, his face does look like a bad*ss... :2guns:

[Melih]

Thanks for comments! New updates:

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/update_01_render.jpg

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/update_01.jpg
http://www.oyungelistirici.net/dosyalar/my_hitman/update_01_a.jpg

... and this is test sculpting for head.

http://www.oyungelistirici.net/01.JPG
http://www.oyungelistirici.net/02.JPG
http://www.oyungelistirici.net/03.JPG

[huzeyfecoskun]

maybe you should work on sculpt,maybe you can add some smooth and sharp wrinkles ;)