WIP My first face - help

[Zac-Donald]

Well decided to finally try to model myself and started to hit a hitch when I started modeling my lips

http://i33.tinypic.com/o0p88z.png

any suggestions on edge flow? I'm trying the wires simple atm, any critics would greatly be appreciated

[MichaelD]

Hey, nice start, I think the problem with the lips is that they are too tight around the corners. I have seen a lot of wires with faces, they have a few circular mesh lines going around the lips, yours seem to crease to tightly, heres a few sites by searching for face modelling wire in google, http://images.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=http://www.ejm.cc/images/folio/realtime/SR-dex-Face-Wire.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.ejm.cc/folio/realtimecharacters_48.php&h=682&w=474&sz=289&hl=en&start=5&tbnid=oIZWidusaeBFQM:&tbnh=139&tbnw=97&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dface%2Bmodelling%2Bwire%26gbv%3D2%26h l%3Den%26sa%3DG
http://images.google.com.au/imgres?imgurl=http://bp1.blogger.com/_8GBseeHUDGs/SBsqMTgzaKI/AAAAAAAAANQ/quJ_zVigA_8/s400/Head_wire.jpg&imgrefurl=http://andrewtalcott.blogspot.com/2008/02/head-progress.html&h=400&w=400&sz=19&hl=en&start=4&tbnid=v-7hWDVn8b-bbM:&tbnh=124&tbnw=124&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dface%2Bmodelling%2Bwire%26gbv%3D2%26h l%3Den%26sa%3DG

hope this helps :)